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Post by Wintery on Mar 31, 2015 9:30:02 GMT -8
It was a dark day in the Camp Ribalth; Diaval had only passed the test Eos had set for her and she just managed to get into the pack. She had only been living in this gloomy place for a few days; however, it fitted her a lot. The darkness and coldness of the place crept upon her, but it was a soothing feeling so she was now at peace once again. The leader Eos had accepted her into the pack as an equal, which had refreshed her mind. Now that she had the protection of a pack, she could continue to be who she was. It was a dream come true, as though her mother knew that she would find her last hope in this place but then her mother would never have had left her without anything anyway. Shaking her smooth pelt, she continued to think over things, as a wolf came upon her. She had not yet met this wolf and was ready to pronouce herself to the wolves of this pack, seeing as she had only just got used to her surroundings.
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Post by Deleted on Apr 9, 2015 12:08:56 GMT -8
RavenShadow walked along the outside of Ribalth, her stomach churning. She hated the Rim Graids with a deep passion. She would stop at nothing to kill one that set even a paw in the Guardians territory. She had been "adopted" by the Guardians. They call her a Guardian, though she really isn't, and Raven and all the other Guardians know it. The only Rim Graid she cared for was her mate, Jauora. He left the pack and found out that love was better that the torture that Eos performed. He loved RavenShadow dearly, and now, he was no longer a Rim Graid, but an adopted Guardian. Smelling blood and fear, Raven thought at though she might puke. Ribalth was no longer temping, nor fascinating. It was in it's prime of evil. Raven heard from one of the Myriffs that a new wolf was in the Rim Graid's pack. She was furious, and at the same time, curious. She wanted to see the new-comer and give it a piece of her mind. "If any of you set foot here in the beautiful glades or forests of Esthra, I will slaughter you," she mumbled under her breath. Feeling that Jauora was missing her, she turned around to exit the border of Ribalth, only to hear a dozen paws thundering towards her. She had been found out.
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Post by Raig on Apr 10, 2015 6:18:46 GMT -8
Adopted?? When?? And Jaoura is spelt Jaoura. Besides that i love it. It is so touching and deep! Good job raven, good job! Tocamo was running with Alex by the banks of The Haven playing with Legion the Myriff. the played in the waves that lapped over the banks and listen tot he birds song. the sun started to set and Alex layed against him. I whuffed at her making her look up into my eyes with her startling hazel green eyes. then she jumped up and ran over to Legion, who had been eating a Maugi, " run into the shadows now we have to go! hurry Max!" Tocamo ran over to Alex and held onto Legions tail and then went into the shadows. darkness fill the world around then. then they were in the light again. but it was moon light. Alex ran over to a spot where a pool of blood lay still, staining the ground beneath it. "what happened?" ask Legion with worry over her face, "Ravenshadow, shes been taken." "how do you know?" "this crystal only gets a crack when someones in pain..."
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Post by Deleted on Apr 10, 2015 6:34:54 GMT -8
((I'm gonna let Wintery reply before I do!))
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Post by Wintery on Apr 10, 2015 7:05:16 GMT -8
Diaval had just tackled a wolf rustling behind the bushes, who seemed to be talking quietly and angrily, a big black wolf. The mystery wolf seemed not to be part of Rim Graids who may the wolf be, maybe a spy she thought as she went to tell someone. As she was pacing around looking she spotted a big completely black wolf, who she knew and happened to be the alpha Eos, submissive her tail lowers and she looks down, slightly crouching herself whilst saying lighty "there's a big black wolf with white markings around the bushes, it doesn't seem to be a memeber of this pack Eos" not sure what was to happen now. Before she knew it, Eos shot off from where he was standing in silence and stealth, what would happen to that wolf she wondered, as she goes off after them. All she heard after a few minutes when she had almost caught up with them was a sharp yelp. The wolf lay knocked out with little blood spilt, the silence re-gained the life around, the wolf wasn't part of the pack, why was it here in the first place, she had only known this place a while, she had not ventured to other places yet. "Who is it?" she asked softly, before they set off, and followed closely behind them keeping an eye on the wolf.
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Post by Deleted on Apr 10, 2015 7:21:15 GMT -8
Raven tried to escape the strong jaws that clamped around her neck. She looked down and saw a crimson droplets stain the dirt. She went wild with rage. Letting out a loud battle cry, she shoved Eos back and rammed him into a tree. Feeling him let go, she charged down the hill towards the other Rim Graids. "The newbie!" she murmured darkly, ramming her head into the black she-wolf's rib cage and darting slickly past the other Rim Graids. She was well experienced when it came to combat. She and BlueFang were the strongest wolves in all of Esthra. She charged through Ribalth, zigzagging to avoid the snaps from the jaws of surrounding Rim Graids. Suddenly, she found herself trapped up against a large black, ash smothered wall. She whipped around, staring in horror as a dozen Rim Graids sickly and slowly made their way toward her....Eos leading them all.
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