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Post by Deleted on Apr 7, 2015 3:47:52 GMT -8
Ermmm, you need the Wolf Application. It's more detailed. And, no offence best friend, but your being a little too over powering. First, she's bigger than all wolves. Two, she can jump super high. Three, her eyes are so powerful, you can't look into them. Four, she can heal anyone. Five, she can speak every language there is, and so much more. You make it seem like she's invincible, and she's the best wolf alive....but she's not. Every wolf is the best wolf alive; all beautiful and unique in their own ways. Every wolf has a weakness....one or two for that matter! Please Blue, just slow down and try not to make her seem like a God. Ugh, I hate telling you what to do! *Faceplam* esthra.freeforums.net/thread/3/wolf-application
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Post by Raig on Apr 7, 2015 4:58:06 GMT -8
sorry! i was more brain storming ideas! sorry your right she too over powering... heh! i am going to edit it when i can. ill do some now if i can.
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Post by Wintery on Apr 7, 2015 9:37:51 GMT -8
Yeah she seems good just the sort of immortal bits that need a little lowering
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Post by Raig on Apr 7, 2015 10:25:47 GMT -8
yea! heh heh i kinda get to imaginative! lol bluefang dies in the book and changes ALOT! so i think you'll like what she'll be like after! Raig
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Post by Wintery on Apr 7, 2015 10:28:25 GMT -8
I hope so to
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Post by Raig on Apr 7, 2015 10:33:29 GMT -8
your a really good friend! thanks! you are so kind. i am very glad you joined this forum!
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Post by Wintery on Apr 7, 2015 10:36:01 GMT -8
Awww thanks
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Post by Raig on Apr 7, 2015 10:37:19 GMT -8
your welcome! if i may ask, do you have any characters that you would like to have in the book?? cause i am thinking of making a thread to let people be in my book.
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Post by Wintery on Apr 7, 2015 10:39:15 GMT -8
No at the minute, but i'm creating other characters so if you wanted, one of them could be in the book, but that would be very nice anyway Update: I do have my fursona, Wishbone aka Opal
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Post by Raig on Apr 7, 2015 10:41:50 GMT -8
sure, it is only if you want to, i hope i'm not breathing down your neck. XD *munches on carrot* hhmmm... wanna bit?? *looks goofy and deranged.
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Post by Wintery on Apr 7, 2015 10:48:28 GMT -8
well a carrot would be nice -gobbles them- and don't worry you're not
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Post by Deleted on Apr 7, 2015 12:07:57 GMT -8
Thanks for changing! She still seems a tiny bit immortal! AND SHE DIES? NOOOOOOOO! *Thunder and lightning* AAAAAAAAAAA! *Yells at rain*
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Post by Raig on Apr 7, 2015 13:15:10 GMT -8
ya, well its a long story. -B
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Post by Deleted on Apr 8, 2015 5:37:13 GMT -8
Just know that Guardian wolves can't be good at everything. Just like how Angels can sin like humans, Guardian Wolves shouldn't be "perfect" either. They need to have something taken away from their ability. Maybe making them as big as average wolves? How about not living longer? I don't know, but it's up to you to decide. Just remember, they can't be perfect! Thanks Blue! *Hugz*
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Post by Raig on Apr 8, 2015 6:02:54 GMT -8
i kno9w you dont like that from the last sleep over but seriously? Eos is a guardian, Widskit is Guardian, and a lot of bad silly characters are Guardian. but i know you want Raven to be the same age and size but... i dont thats about it!
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Post by Deleted on Apr 8, 2015 9:13:55 GMT -8
I understand, and I respect that. I sent you a PM about this! Love ya! :3
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